Not so much the typos as the use of a Yahoo email that may raise suspicions

Uk National Promo Inc,
United Kingdom.

You have emerged Winner from this Weeks Draws.Contact
Sharon Cole(MRS)
E-mail:sharon_cole91@yahoo.com.hk

For Claims Of Funds,Provide the Following Information in your Email.
Full Name:
Email Address:
Home Address:
Sex:
Age:
Occupation:
Tel:
Country:

Winning Details,
Amount Won: £552,000 pounds sterling
REFERENCE NUMBER:UK/839030X2/14
BATCH NUMBER:065/088/XY24
TICKET NUMBER:023-1111-790-458
Date Of Draw 24th August 2008.

From The Clerk Office,
Result Department